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Chapter 0- Prologue Redone

Mon Jun 22, 2009, 12:37 PM
-NOTE: Story is being restarted, re-written, and changed massively. There will be a higher amount of violence, most likely. Prologue is much shorter than original- but it's violent.

Hope the story will be enjoyed none the less ^^;

Prologue:
Chapter 00~


“Mother, please!!” A young girl called out as a whip cracked, digging into the soft flesh on her back. Skin ripped, red meat visible, blood dribbling from the fresh wound. She cried as she tried running. “Why mother?! Why?!”

With brisk, long strides, her mother caught up quickly, grabbing a hold of her black tresses and slamming her body against a tree. The young took numerous kicks to the abdomen and legs. The girl coughed, trying to catch her breath. The whip pulled out once again, the young girl struggled to her knees and tried crawling away. The whip wrapped around her neck, the girl choking, flecks of salvia, tinted crimson from her blood flew from between her bruised lips. She reached a single hand up, gasping for air. Her consciousness was slipping, and fast. Thick red fluid began running down her slender neck, the whip way too tight around it. With a few more spasms, her hand became limp. Her vision became bright white. “I’m… I'm…”

The young girl passed out on the grass. Face dirty- stained with tears and blood. Her mid-length blue-black hair gathered dirt in it. Her clothing, tattered. The grass became dyed with her blood.

Freya Raoul was convinced she was going to die…

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  • Watching: Nothing
  • Playing: Rune Factory
  • Eating: Nachos
  • Drinking: Nothing.

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  • Current Residence: Ridgewood, Queens, NY
  • Interests: Anime, Manga, drawing, karaoke, music, AMVs
  • Favourite movie: Spirited Away
  • Favourite band or musician: Romi Paku and See Saw
  • Favourite genre of music: J pop and Rock
  • Favourite artist: Hoshino Katsura and Hiromu Arakawa
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  • Favourite style of art: Traditional penciling!
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:iconenzing88:
Thanks for the fave :D
:iconhizashiamatsu:
welcome to dA! :wave:

I found your gallery while searching for OCs online *loves looking at other people's OCs*
:iconfastclickchic0413:
welcome to dA! :D any d. gray-fan is always cool in my book! ;p my wallpaper is allen too! XD

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:iconsamaranoutofnames:
^^ Thank you! :3 It's always good to have more D.Gray supporters around xD

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I have another DA so if you see the same pictures on that one, I'm the saaame person! It even has the same name under the user >< I just felt like getting a new one, since I hate the name =P
:iconfastclickchic0413:
no prob ;p

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I'm not on the dark side ( they apparently have cookies?), but I have the milk so they need me from time to time.

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