Working on chapter one- but here's the prologue with some edits~

Yeah... sorry for being brutal to Frey in the first chapter... but after 5, it won't be as bad... I think.... >>;

Prologue:
Chapter 00~


"Mother, please!!" A young girl called out as a whip cracked, digging into the soft flesh on her back. Skin ripped, red meat visible, blood dribbling from the fresh wound. She cried as she tried running. "Why mother?! Why?!"

With brisk, long strides, her mother caught up quickly and grabbed a hold of her black tresses, slamming the girl's small body against a tree. "You even dare ask me why…? If only I didn't give birth to you… You cursed little bitch!"

The young took numerous hits to the face, and finally a knee to her abdomen, knocking the wind out of her. The girl coughed, trying to catch her breath. The whip pulled out once again, the young girl struggled to her knees and tried crawling away. The whip wrapped around her neck, the girl choking. Flecks of salvia, tinted crimson from her blood flew from between her bruised lips.

"You're not escaping!" The girl's mother yelled, gripping the whip's handle tightly. "YOU drove them away… It's all your fault! Just die already!!"

The little girl reached a single hand up, gasping for air. Her consciousness was slipping, and relatively quickly. Thick red fluid began running down her slender neck, the whip way too tight around it. With a few more spasms, her hand became limp. Her vision became bright white. "I… I'm…"

The young girl passed out on the grass. Face dirty- laying in the mud, stained scarlet with tears. Her mid-length blue-black hair gathered dirt in it. Her clothing, tattered. The grass became dyed with her blood as snow flakes began slowly descending from the sky above.

Freya Raoul was convinced she was going to die…

-End Prologue-